You should go and check out the latest version of the shirt (much has changed).
There is still room for improvement, perhaps?
Threadless has a nifty "critique" feature, so you can give yo' two cents worth if you like.
Joining Threadless today. I submitted my first-ever teeshirt design for pre-judgment critique:
(Click to see!)
Help me help myself by making suggestions regarding the design! If I can manage to get a shirt printed, I get 2 grand (enough for me to live on for ~2 months!), so if you've ever wanted a way to support the arts without having to pay any actual currency, you are in luck!
Yes, you have to sign up for Threadless in order to vote, but it is free to do so, and I shall be forever in your debt!